Does it sound the way you want it to?

As I read through my paper, I can most definitely her my voice throughout it.  Although I may hear my own voice, the goal is for my reading audience to be able to hear it as well.  It would be silly of me to be able to say there aren’t things I would like to change in my paper.  I do se where my paper touches on what I know, why I am writing this, the search, and what I learned.  They also follow and order that is easily connected and understood.  With that being said, I do wish I had delved into a bit more detail about my interviews and even more about why I chose the people that I did.

A excerpt from Elbow’s writing that I found interesting was the mention of naturally skilled writers instinctively testing everything…