As I worked thoroughly on my I-search paper, I was able to see areas that were in need of improvement. Last week, we were split up into groups and were assigned an I-search paper to read and discuss with our fellow groups. This day was most influential for me because I was able to see what an “above acceptable” paper were to sound like. Also, I felt like I was a big participant in this discussion. I went through points on the rubric and described to my group why I felt that David’s writing was considered excellent in each category. The way David displayed his passion for his topic really got me thinking of how I can do the same for my readers to effectively show my own passion to the search I had undergone. His paper not only helped me work on choosing the right kind of vocabulary to…