I just want to start by saying I personally love this activity, because the clash between spoken English and written English has been my main issue in all my writing. I tend to write the way I speak, and that makes it difficult for my readers to understand my writing. This issue tends to happen to me the most when I’m dealing with professional writing such as research papers or thesis papers. For this project, I don’t believe this will be that much of a issue because I’m dealing with a narrative type paper.

– What I felt sounded brilliant was when I made the connection between Adam and eve’s story and my topic. The phrase: “and now we’re here eating apples too” seemed pretty clever to me. Although it is a bit sarcastic and slang, I’m sure my readers will find it humerus. It’s something a picky reader would…