My I-Search paper has been going pretty good. Being able to write my research endeavors as a narrator rather than the tedious third person approach has been a new but great experience. Having conducted one of my interviews so far and looked up some important information online, I was able to put together a rough draft for my paper. Once I completed it, I put it aside for a day as suggested and came back to it ready to read it aloud to myself.

Overall, I do think most of my writing sounded the way I want it to. However, being the critic I am about my work, I wasn’t completely satisfied. Reading it aloud did help me detect an organization problem. Right after the introduction, I talked about my ignorance when it came down to making an appointment with a Sheikh. However, in the following paragraph I began talking…