After reading my draft of my I-search paper a couple times, I was pretty content with the way it sounded. I am aware that I have many things to edit throughout the essay, however, the overall tone of the paper was just as I’d intended. I am also pleased with my research. I am glad that I did not base my research on one thing such as interviews. I observed myself and others, interviewed shoppers, and took note of my own shopping habits both online and in stores. I noticed that I was actually very observant, helping me notice things I would’ve never paid attention to. My observation of everything down to the beautiful girls who modeled the clothing lead me to an answer to my research question. I am very pleased by the fact that I learned what I was hoping to learn because my findings are surely going to…